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7!3 on Recess by horus8 10 Feb 2005, 5:38 AM
nice :)
7!3 on charred pixels by FreeFormFixation 10 Feb 2005, 5:44 AM
not bad.
Dovina on Beating heart by celticskatermatt1 10 Feb 2005, 8:04 AM
Good up through line 3, except for spelling. After that it gets trite.
Dovina on A Metahaiku by dbond 10 Feb 2005, 8:06 AM
What's kigo?
7!3 on The Tree by Joe-joe 10 Feb 2005, 5:55 AM
nice :)!
Dovina on The Sleep Fantastic by nentwined 10 Feb 2005, 7:56 AM
You're being imbic with a myth-like tale. But in a few places you sacrifice clarity for it. In Line 6, I thought "was" is distracting. And if being imbic is important, then why the lapse in Veres 3. Line 3? Like it.
Dovina on some deleted poem 10 Feb 2005, 8:01 AM
You've got a good flow going until the last verse. I like what it says, but rhythm seems to falter in the last two lines, and the rhyme is not exact.
celticskatermatt1 on some deleted poem 9 Feb 2005, 4:40 PM
nice but weird
*.*ReAdY To SnAp*.* on hopefully im something by ~ska~ 9 Feb 2005, 4:59 PM
I loved it really........Look at my suicide poem and rank it please....10...
*.*ReAdY To SnAp*.* on She wishes by INTRANSIT 9 Feb 2005, 5:07 PM
ok than
*.*ReAdY To SnAp*.* on water falls by Bill Z Bub 9 Feb 2005, 5:07 PM
w/e
*.*ReAdY To SnAp*.* on Unemployment Lining by Jeremi B. Handrinos 9 Feb 2005, 5:08 PM
okay
*.*ReAdY To SnAp*.* on untitled by highnightmaregurl 9 Feb 2005, 5:09 PM
sweeeeeeeeeeeeeeet
*.*ReAdY To SnAp*.* on Prometheus sang for vultures by horus8 9 Feb 2005, 5:09 PM
uh huh
*.*ReAdY To SnAp*.* on Lovelier Than Love by Bhaskaryya 9 Feb 2005, 5:10 PM
nice
some deleted user on Beating heart by celticskatermatt1 9 Feb 2005, 6:55 PM
hey this is really meaningfull
sliver on Epitaph of Innocence by woodstock20000 9 Feb 2005, 10:11 PM
I would tend to agree, We are losing our sense of morality
sliver on some deleted poem 9 Feb 2005, 10:14 PM
lies this need? Your poetry has improved quite a bit, I really liked this one.
Dovina on some deleted poem 10 Feb 2005, 8:07 AM
Why did you post this twice under different titles?
al-naafiysh on Goodbye by Dovina 10 Feb 2005, 11:02 AM
What! You can"t fight no more Like my father? Your friend the math teacher.