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Beating heart (Free verse) by celticskatermatt1 beating soundly counting measures
my heart throbbs too stay alive
it skips a stroke now and then
time comes and goes with the beat
but for when the time comes
rythmic beats all must fade
often it brings a tear.
Up the ladder:
Mother
Down the ladder:
Steal my heart
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Posted: February 9, 2005 4:36 PM PST; Last modified: February 9, 2005 4:38 PM PSTWeighted score: 5.345782 Overall Rank: 3416 Comments:
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deleted user @ 68.7.189.144
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9-Feb-05/6:55 PM
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hey this is really meaningfull
Good up through line 3, except for spelling. After that it gets trite.
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