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Virtue and Sin (Lyric) by dooley
I wrote a poem a lifetime ago
Eight pages in length, of beauty to show
This girl what I thought that her world could be
But how did I know she would want none of me?
The beauty we build, we nurture and grow
Falls victim to pain and the hurt that I know
When beauty created is thrown to the dust
Ignored, overlooked in favor of lust
For something a writer could never provide
Of something that low men make no pains to hide
âOnly fair,â said the snake to the injured raccoon
âWhat use in your life is shooting the moon?â
âYou will only find hurt in the care you dispatch,
for the ones you seek now look just to attach
to the same kind of men who have hurt them before
until it seems you can take it no more.â
âWelcome life,â mocked the snake as the young raccoon bled
âYou will find you idealism beaten and dead.
And beside it your words, actions and dreams
Thrown to the curb as an end to the means.â
âAnd by giving her faith that some men are good
she returns to the low ones, thinking they should
Be better men, a good man and true
She will never consider a good man like you.â
âFor considering that would break all the rules,
You can show her the truth, rat, but you lack the tools
To show her why you are a possible match
By the time you have learned them sheâs just closed the latch.â
âAnd in that locked chamber she will give to that man
Everything sacred, according to plan
Everything you hold up and revere
Will be given to him, my young chevalier.â
The snake silenced now to let it sink in
Virtue for women is lower than sin
For while sin attracts those we seek to set free
Virtue is a trait few women can see.
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.285714
Weighted score: 5.345782
Overall Rank: 3437
Posted: November 30, 2005 8:12 PM PST; Last modified: November 30, 2005 8:12 PM PST
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