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Lovelier Than Love (Acrostic) by Bhaskaryya
In my eyes, lives a picture,
Lovelier than love itself, she seems.
Over-shadowed by this illusion, my existence,
Vulnerably attached to all my dreams.
Every night in my slumber, she re-appears,
Yachting me away to a new world.
Over the misty cloudy terrain, I travel,
Under the influence of her magical hold.
Knocked over by reality at last,
As I wake up at the on-set of dawn,
Sunshine fills up my world
Though it only makes me frown,
Until the next mystical night ,
Re-appears when, my escape, my pretty angel,
In whose company, even the darkness appears bright.
Acrostic message : I LOVE YOU KASTURI
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.0
Weighted score: 5.2689414
Overall Rank: 3900
Posted: December 28, 2004 10:14 PM PST; Last modified: December 28, 2004 10:14 PM PST
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I liked this a lot. Didn't spot any errors. (but was i actually looking? nope)
Flowed well.