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Lovelier Than Love (Acrostic) by Bhaskaryya
In my eyes, lives a picture, Lovelier than love itself, she seems. Over-shadowed by this illusion, my existence, Vulnerably attached to all my dreams. Every night in my slumber, she re-appears, Yachting me away to a new world. Over the misty cloudy terrain, I travel, Under the influence of her magical hold. Knocked over by reality at last, As I wake up at the on-set of dawn, Sunshine fills up my world Though it only makes me frown, Until the next mystical night , Re-appears when, my escape, my pretty angel, In whose company, even the darkness appears bright. Acrostic message : I LOVE YOU KASTURI

Up the ladder: real folk blues
Down the ladder: With Reckless Abandon

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.0
Weighted score: 5.2689414
Overall Rank: 3912
Posted: December 28, 2004 10:14 PM PST; Last modified: December 28, 2004 10:14 PM PST
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[8] Blindpoetry @ 68.11.192.79 | 28-Dec-04/10:43 PM | Reply
Votes make it more clear and exact, depending on who comments.

I liked this a lot. Didn't spot any errors. (but was i actually looking? nope)

Flowed well.
[n/a] Bhaskaryya @ 61.3.137.25 > Blindpoetry | 28-Dec-04/10:48 PM | Reply
Thanks a lot!!
[10] jroday @ 204.215.33.76 | 30-Dec-04/1:14 AM | Reply
I like this poem very much, your skills are getting better. I bless you with a -10-
[n/a] Bhaskaryya @ 61.0.144.80 > jroday | 30-Dec-04/9:04 AM | Reply
Ironically I wrote this earlier than the ones I posted before. Perhaps I am deteriorating!!
[10] jroday @ 204.215.33.8 > Bhaskaryya | 31-Dec-04/12:33 PM | Reply
No I dont think so. Perhaps I am getting to old to keep up with you young people at age fifty (smile)
[10] *.*ReAdY To SnAp*.* @ 65.95.30.115 | 9-Feb-05/5:10 PM | Reply
nice
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