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Lovelier Than Love (Acrostic) by Bhaskaryya

In my eyes, lives a picture, Lovelier than love itself, she seems. Over-shadowed by this illusion, my existence, Vulnerably attached to all my dreams. Every night in my slumber, she re-appears, Yachting me away to a new world. Over the misty cloudy terrain, I travel, Under the influence of her magical hold. Knocked over by reality at last, As I wake up at the on-set of dawn, Sunshine fills up my world Though it only makes me frown, Until the next mystical night , Re-appears when, my escape, my pretty angel, In whose company, even the darkness appears bright. Acrostic message : I LOVE YOU KASTURI

jroday 31-Dec-04/12:33 PM
No I dont think so. Perhaps I am getting to old to keep up with you young people at age fifty (smile)




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