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The Tree (Free verse) by Joe-joe
The tree stands still in the shadow of my stare Then dances wily when I glance away The tree is unyielding to my touch But savors the flavor of woodland dew The tree is a silent partner But sings songs made from wind and rain The tree is all these things when I am awake.
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.6666665
Weighted score: 5.1986713
Overall Rank: 4613
Posted: February 8, 2005 12:55 PM PST; Last modified: February 8, 2005 12:55 PM PST
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[10] Dovina @ 12.72.33.52 | 8-Feb-05/2:21 PM | Reply
This is your best by far! What's got into you?
[10] 7!3 @ 219.95.8.236 | 10-Feb-05/5:55 AM | Reply
nice :)!
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