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The Tree

Member since 2003 · Posted 8 Feb 2005 · 2 comments

The tree stands still in the shadow of my stare Then dances wily when I glance away The tree is unyielding to my touch But savors the flavor of woodland dew The tree is a silent partner But sings songs made from wind and rain The tree is all these things when I am awake.

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[10] Dovina 8-Feb-05/2:21 PM Reply

This is your best by far! What's got into you?

[10] 7!3 10-Feb-05/5:55 AM Reply

nice :)!