Masterpiece.

Utterly brilliant -1,000,000,000,000-

Please Vote or leave a comment I just want to know if it is good or not to keep writing poems on here.....<:(

thats amazing really read soem of my poems

weird man

Here's a pome that's naught more than an anagram Of a word with a y that's gone on the lam I assume you've some meaning In there for the gleaning But if none can construe it, who gives a damne?

I agree with Dovina on verse 4 since joining P.R., and reading some of the comments Mr.jroday you hit the hammer on the nail.

Christ, this is a good fucking poem. I read it a year ago, and it was still in my head...so I came looking for it. And it's still gold.

If you proofread this, which aparently you didn't, you'll find all sorts of spelling, punctuation, and grammar mistakes. But the biggest mistake is the ending, which some young depressed fool might read and take just enough encouragement from to do it.

Nonsense! The world is not lost as you say. 0 for content, 5 for poetic form.

Good for a giggle

Alright to sappy for me lol ...7..

Sounds familiar

hit the spot

haha love your poem ..10..

Loser

Shite.

Now that's reality!

Why do you say, "My goal is . . ." in verse 4, giving a way out, when you don't in the others? "perfect union" is impossible and weakens the aparently possible committments. "them" in the last verse is a bit nebulous, and I wonder why you even include this verse.

I love it....Out standing vote some of mine plase