Re: a love not meant to be by nentwined	cabot 68.8.167.40	13-Oct-05/4:39 PM
great poem
regarding some deleted poem...	cabot 68.8.167.40	13-Oct-05/4:47 PM
great poem
Re: Old Friends by sliver	some deleted user 207.200.116.65	13-Oct-05/5:07 PM
OK...so why did you say I gave you a zero when imnotgoodatpoetry did???? Whats up with that Sliver? I GAVE you a ten....
Re: In the aspens by sliver	some deleted user 207.200.116.65	13-Oct-05/5:23 PM
Here's the ten you wanted
Re: Prayer For The Church by sliver	some deleted user 207.200.116.65	13-Oct-05/5:25 PM
Yippeee sliver--excellent poem. I thought it was fabulous...so i gave you a TEN.......i am putting ten in caps just to make sure you don't mistaken it for a 0!
Re: Into My World by sliver	some deleted user 207.200.116.65	13-Oct-05/5:25 PM
Here is another 10.
Re: A life unsure by sliver	some deleted user 207.200.116.65	13-Oct-05/5:26 PM
Ok...i found talent in the family! It wasn't a lost cause... 10!~
Re: Linger on by sliver	some deleted user 207.200.116.65	13-Oct-05/5:27 PM
Excellent poem.........as always, as you like to hear. -10-
Re: All There by sliver	some deleted user 207.200.116.65	13-Oct-05/5:28 PM
Good poem. Excuse me for not giving elaborate comments. -10-
Re: A heart without keys by sliver	some deleted user 207.200.116.65	13-Oct-05/5:29 PM
Here ya go sliver...Another 10
Re: 'Till Then by sliver	some deleted user 207.200.116.65	13-Oct-05/5:29 PM
-10-
Re: Between Now And Then by sliver	some deleted user 207.200.116.65	13-Oct-05/5:30 PM
How come this one is so low? I LOVE this poem! Its might favorite of yours! 10
Re: Carry You Inside by sliver	some deleted user 207.200.116.65	13-Oct-05/5:31 PM
Wow..i never read this one--this one is great! Im your biggest fan! 10!
Re: To My Love by sliver	some deleted user 207.200.116.65	13-Oct-05/5:32 PM
thats a huge poem! It was good. Worth a ten...and more
Re: The Finger of my Mind by sliver	some deleted user 207.200.116.65	13-Oct-05/5:33 PM
Good poem. That completes it Sliver 10 on all
regarding some deleted poem...	Prince of Void 83.170.54.101	13-Oct-05/6:05 PM
sitting with darkness talking to sadness holding emptiness caressing hoplessness feeling placeless dying in the bed of forgetfulness
regarding some deleted poem...	D P Robertson 202.138.208.72	13-Oct-05/8:17 PM
You are the test vote- I have commeneted on this in another world and found it to be wonderful then- it is still wonderful. The images are an object lesson in great writing David
regarding some deleted poem...	D P Robertson 202.138.208.72	13-Oct-05/8:20 PM
I probably could have given you more but fuck it- start low and build
Re: Are you my love? by Prince of Void	D P Robertson 202.138.208.72	13-Oct-05/8:29 PM
That really is a bit of dog's bollocks isn't it? From the illiterate "Finally did we loss ourselves?" that's "lose" I think, to the bog of cliches the reader finds themselves sinking in. "Where I see you are still the love couldn’t perish Let me sink in the ocean of divination and devotion" The first line sounds like Yoda after sniffing deep thoughts from a paint tin and the second is just shit. However, there are some gems sprinkled throughout this and what you need to do is focus and edit. other than that "it just divides us and it’s wearing me down" David
Re: Kiteflying by april fool	D P Robertson 202.138.208.72	13-Oct-05/8:34 PM
For an eight year old's first effort, all I can say it was very brave- awful but brave none the less- do you have any other interests to fill your day? David