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All There (Lyric) by sliver
Somewhere in the soil, But not really. Still I think of him there With alot of feeling. The last time I saw him They were lowering him down But I know he's not still there Beneath that hallowed ground. I Can't be the only one, But those others-just like me, Come to his final resting place And get down on their knees. Wherever he is right now I'm sure he hears our prayers. And especially today, He knows we were all there.

Up the ladder: Love Letter
Down the ladder: standing outside the door

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Arithmetic Mean: 8.8
Weighted score: 6.9
Overall Rank: 242
Posted: May 10, 2004 8:42 PM PDT; Last modified: May 16, 2004 7:21 PM PDT
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[10] electroman1979 @ 198.81.26.15 | 16-May-04/8:15 PM | Reply
good poem, brings back memories for me as well
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[10] deleted user @ 207.200.116.65 | 13-Oct-05/5:28 PM | Reply
Good poem. Excuse me for not giving elaborate comments.
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