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All There

Member since 2002 · Posted 10 May 2004 · Edited 16 May 2004 · 2 comments

Somewhere in the soil, But not really. Still I think of him there With alot of feeling. The last time I saw him They were lowering him down But I know he's not still there Beneath that hallowed ground. I Can't be the only one, But those others-just like me, Come to his final resting place And get down on their knees. Wherever he is right now I'm sure he hears our prayers. And especially today, He knows we were all there.

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[10] electroman1979 16-May-04/8:15 PM Reply
good poem, brings back memories for me as well
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[10] deleted user 13-Oct-05/5:28 PM Reply
Good poem. Excuse me for not giving elaborate comments.
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