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Sea Words (Free verse) by ecargo
Rolling smooth as tumbled stones--
pellucid quartz; flat, skimmer ovals
of polished granite, gneiss; shifting
storm berm, these words turn sweet and round
in my mouth like small fruit, sea grape,
sea plum. The small, naming magic
draws eelgrass and blue mussel,
slipper shell, marsh elder,
hiss and hush words, the long, slow
wash of syllables, plosives,
sibilants rising like the siren islands:
Shea and Chimon, Sheffield,
birdcalling Cockenoe, that daymoon
island, curving round bird names like bells,
like ring gulls chiming.
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Arithmetic Mean: 8.8
Weighted score: 6.9
Overall Rank: 243
Posted: March 22, 2006 8:58 AM PST; Last modified: March 22, 2006 8:58 AM PST
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