poemranker ::Sea Words by ecargo

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Free verse № 141251

Sea Words

Member since 2002 · Posted 22 Mar 2006 · 6 comments

Rolling smooth as tumbled stones-- pellucid quartz; flat, skimmer ovals of polished granite, gneiss; shifting storm berm, these words turn sweet and round in my mouth like small fruit, sea grape, sea plum. The small, naming magic draws eelgrass and blue mussel, slipper shell, marsh elder, hiss and hush words, the long, slow wash of syllables, plosives, sibilants rising like the siren islands: Shea and Chimon, Sheffield, birdcalling Cockenoe, that daymoon island, curving round bird names like bells, like ring gulls chiming.

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A favorite of god'swife.

6 comments

[10] INTRANSIT 22-Mar-06/9:13 AM Reply
Surfs up!
[9] Dovina 22-Mar-06/10:37 AM Reply
Great description. Could be the opening of an epic novel or the spoken intro to a wide-screen classic. But as a poem, I look for metaphor and meaning; maybe I missed it.
[10] god'swife 22-Mar-06/9:23 PM Reply
Sweet and round. Sweet and round. This poem actually called up the ocean-front for me. I can hear the gulls squawking.
[9] Ranger 23-Mar-06/6:33 AM Reply
Yep, this did it for me.
[10] Niphredil 23-Mar-06/9:39 AM Reply
Aye, for me too, forsooth.

Your sea poems are terrific! Where do you live, I wonder?
[9] Ranger 24-Mar-06/1:42 PM Reply
Love the play of words in the title too. Although it's taken me over a day to recognise it. *taps skull*