Re: Inner Peace by chesty82	Celticai 123.211.253.133	15-Oct-08/10:20 PM
This gives me a sense of your internal struggle, Chesty.
Re: My love by chesty82	Celticai 123.211.253.133	15-Oct-08/10:21 PM
I enjoyed this one! - especially the last verse!
Re: Opening Your Heart by chesty82	Celticai 123.211.253.133	15-Oct-08/10:22 PM
Knowing a little of the situation that surrounds the writing of this poem, I'm moved greatly by this. Congratulations Chesty - I hope that the person it was intended for has read it!
Re: Words by Celticai	Celticai 123.211.253.133	15-Oct-08/10:26 PM
I'm glad that people have found this poem difficult to read.. that was the purpose! lol It was supposed to demonstrate a process rather than a product.
Re: Mountain Fever by Celticai	Celticai 123.211.253.133	15-Oct-08/10:30 PM
Thank you Nentwined... I suppose the my verbosity overflows into my poetry. I speak very much as I write - just like Regency Ladies - twittering mindlessly, repetitiously covering the same inadequate sayings endeavouring to get my point across. I appreciate all the comments I receive from others on this site.
Re: Mountain Fever by Celticai	Celticai 123.211.253.133	15-Oct-08/10:32 PM
No one has actually commented on the intent of the poem. I've received many talking about the 'nature' of this poem - that it is about landscapes and one-ness with the earth. It was actually about seeking an orgasmic experience.. go figure.
Re: Mountain Fever by Celticai	Celticai 123.211.253.133	19-Oct-08/12:47 AM
I'd go with not a good poem personally.
Re: a clover or two by T. Jonathron Remp	Dovina 75.82.253.189	19-Oct-08/11:39 AM
funny, could make the last 5 words a new line
regarding some deleted poem...	Dovina 75.82.253.189	19-Oct-08/11:49 AM
The facetious last word is great with pretty Pleasantville, bloody and impaled on a white picket fence.
Re: Suicide Note [Disposal Instructions Included] by SupremeDreamer	New Life Drug 76.126.35.200	19-Oct-08/7:46 PM
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! After 6 long years I have returned to poemranker. God this is awkward...
Re: Suicide Note [Disposal Instructions Included] by SupremeDreamer	New Life Drug 76.126.35.200	19-Oct-08/7:51 PM
P.S. That box will be MINE. What, you thought you were the only person who knew where the Guadalupe River was? San Jose native speaking.
Re: Childhood Memories by Jessina	amanda_dcosta 82.178.132.117	25-Oct-08/4:06 AM
Hi Jess, good to see you around. What's happening and how have you been ? Good to see your poem here.
Re: Beslan by Ranger	amanda_dcosta 82.178.132.117	25-Oct-08/4:13 AM
I think I read this many times and fail to see how I didnt comment on it. Its lovely writing. BTW - I tried mailing you a couple of times on your social network page and your mailing add, but it looks like you dont use them anymore. however , if you get this message, send me a test mail. Anyway, hows everything and what's happening with you.
Re: FHjk by Dark Angle	OMOMOMOM 86.139.74.5	27-Oct-08/3:29 PM
TUT TUT TUT.still 7 though
Re: SOMETIMES? by Garrett S Sexton	OMOMOMOM 86.139.74.5	27-Oct-08/3:36 PM
I love it, a bit weird but still gr8 BUT there is just one thing its all about cat shit!
Re: Inner Peace by chesty82	OMOMOMOM 86.147.172.234	28-Oct-08/1:32 AM
I LIKE IT.MY COMMENT IS A BIT SHORT BUT OH WELL.(AT LEAST I COMMENTED).
regarding some deleted poem...	OMOMOMOM 86.147.172.234	28-Oct-08/1:41 AM
lol
Re: Spanish Patio at Old Mission Inn by Dovina	Garrett S Sexton 81.159.186.162	29-Oct-08/1:08 PM
Goes on a bit too much for old Sexton here, also contradiction in many many places where intent WAS NOT MEANT!
Re: Miserable by Miggy	Garrett S Sexton 81.159.186.162	29-Oct-08/1:11 PM
you made me miserable.
Re: WHAT PEOPLE DO by OMOMOMOM	Garrett S Sexton 81.159.186.162	29-Oct-08/1:14 PM
typo, so a 9 [is is] OH GO ON THEN 10 I OFTEN MAKEA DA MISTAKAAAAAAAAAAAAAA.............