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Beslan (Sonnet) by Ranger
In your hands the balalaikas burn
with nervous frictionâs flame. Jesting tongues
of poppy-reddened fleeting fools adjourn
for second dawn-lightâs gut and wire-strung
triangular and splintered fretted frame.
All notes run sharp but stave the coming gloom:
the clouding air is low. You sing your shame
to falling stones of heavenâs crumbling tomb,
and balalaikas cry again to call
their children home. The ragged choirs resound
in song to praise the holy minor fall
of Hallelujah. Angels curl around
like ruined smoke in eyes which turn opaque,
as men atone and childrenâs voices break.
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Arithmetic Mean: 9.428572
Weighted score: 6.191026
Overall Rank: 999
Posted: June 6, 2007 5:32 AM PDT; Last modified: June 6, 2007 5:32 AM PDT
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