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Inner Peace (Other) by chesty82 eachday i search my soul
as i remember my old life
inside i am not whole
but this gives me strength to fight
i battle with the future
the present and the past
to become the better person
that i know is in my heart
if i truly feel this way
i know i will accomplish
whatever i set my mind too
and there is nothing that will stop me
but first i must find peace
deep within myself
nurturing the seed
that will help restore my health
till then i will stay strong
focusing on hope
for now i realise its up to me
to choose to sink or float
Up the ladder:
Radio Scan
Down the ladder:
Shoe Thief
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Posted: October 7, 2008 4:42 AM PDT; Last modified: October 7, 2008 4:42 AM PDTWeighted score: 5.357609 Overall Rank: 3382 Comments:
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Celticai @ 123.211.253.133
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15-Oct-08/10:20 PM
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This gives me a sense of your internal struggle, Chesty.
I LIKE IT.MY COMMENT IS A BIT SHORT BUT OH WELL.(AT LEAST I COMMENTED).
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