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Inner Peace (Other) by chesty82
eachday i search my soul as i remember my old life inside i am not whole but this gives me strength to fight i battle with the future the present and the past to become the better person that i know is in my heart if i truly feel this way i know i will accomplish whatever i set my mind too and there is nothing that will stop me but first i must find peace deep within myself nurturing the seed that will help restore my health till then i will stay strong focusing on hope for now i realise its up to me to choose to sink or float

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Arithmetic Mean: 8.0
Weighted score: 5.357609
Overall Rank: 3383
Posted: October 7, 2008 4:42 AM PDT; Last modified: October 7, 2008 4:42 AM PDT
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[8] Celticai @ 123.211.253.133 | 15-Oct-08/10:20 PM | Reply
This gives me a sense of your internal struggle, Chesty.
[9] OMOMOMOM @ 86.147.172.234 | 28-Oct-08/1:32 AM | Reply
I LIKE IT.MY COMMENT IS A BIT SHORT BUT OH WELL.(AT LEAST I COMMENTED).
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