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Opening Your Heart (Other) by chesty82
Six years ago, you wrote me
Opening your heart
Just like a burning candle
Guiding me from out the dark
The effect i regret, was not instant
Still it guided me through fears
The tears grew gradually distant
As i matured over the years
I'm sorry i haven't tried harder
Or ended up doing wrong things
Still i've always wanted to please you
And deal with what ever life brings
Life has been a battle
Still i'll never ever give up
Just knowing your here to support me
Has always been enough
I just want to say i appreciate
Everything you've done
I just hope i can repay you
And make you proud to call me your son
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Arithmetic Mean: 9.0
Weighted score: 5.1897035
Overall Rank: 4767
Posted: October 7, 2008 4:28 AM PDT; Last modified: October 7, 2008 4:28 AM PDT
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