poemranker ::With a smile and a light heart... by Nepanthe

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Free verse № 156250

With a smile and a light heart...

by Nepanthe

Member since 2007 · Posted 21 Oct 2008 · 2 comments

Pretty things, come to be vague impressions the things which ground me, pull me away again further. Laugh back to me in dreams! Haunt the lines in my face! Blind me hypnotized into the flames! Synchronize with me, this harmony which grounds me, pulls me away again further. Structure for which these bones pull themselves to be a body, then one day as ash, flutter up, up into the breeze!

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[n/a] Garrett S Sexton 29-Oct-08/1:20 PM Reply
PUT THIS IN THE TATE MODERN. WHAT ARE YOU ABOUT? IS THIS POEM A MIDDLE AGED NEW YORK FEM? WHERE DOES IT WANT? IF ANY? NOT FOR ME BUT EXPLAIN CAUSE I CANNIE SEE THE COLOUR[COLOR, FOR YOU IN THE U.S.]
[n/a] Nepanthe › Garrett S Sexton 29-Oct-08/6:11 PM Reply
Your typemanship has been capsized, please flip over, and dial again. This is a recording.