poemranker ::Just hold me by amanda_dcosta

DetailsThe poem, its numbers, and the conversation.

Sonnet № 159691

Just hold me

Member since 2005 · Posted 20 Apr 2011 · Edited 20 Apr 2011 · 0 comments

The morning breaks, sun streams across the earth There are things to be done throughout the day So busy, toiling many hours at work Tired and worn; there seems no other way. The distance wide, the seas keep us apart. Not out of choice; for such is what fate’s given Though strange, we love, and love with all our heart each other, with hopes of our wedded union. Yet, though I seem so strong and courageous And go on living one day to the next I break down, struggle, wonder why I cannot Walk the path that my heart says is best. If only your arms could just hold me tight To cross the seas sans fear, perhaps I might.

Rate it

0 is the worst, 10 the best. Pick a number, add a comment if you like, then send it. Keys: 0–9 pick, Enter sends.

mean 7.00 weighted 5.09 rank 6175 views 306 View voting details →

1 vote so far. Yours would make 2.1 vote so far

0 comments

Nobody has said anything yet.