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Just hold me (Sonnet) by amanda_dcosta
The morning breaks, sun streams across the earth
There are things to be done throughout the day
So busy, toiling many hours at work
Tired and worn; there seems no other way.
The distance wide, the seas keep us apart.
Not out of choice; for such is what fateâs given
Though strange, we love, and love with all our heart
each other, with hopes of our wedded union.
Yet, though I seem so strong and courageous
And go on living one day to the next
I break down, struggle, wonder why I cannot
Walk the path that my heart says is best.
If only your arms could just hold me tight
To cross the seas sans fear, perhaps I might.
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Arithmetic Mean: 7.0
Weighted score: 5.094852
Overall Rank: 6164
Posted: April 20, 2011 11:41 PM PDT; Last modified: April 20, 2011 11:43 PM PDT
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