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With a smile and a light heart... (Free verse) by Nepanthe

Pretty things, come to be vague impressions the things which ground me, pull me away again further. Laugh back to me in dreams! Haunt the lines in my face! Blind me hypnotized into the flames! Synchronize with me, this harmony which grounds me, pulls me away again further. Structure for which these bones pull themselves to be a body, then one day as ash, flutter up, up into the breeze!

Garrett S Sexton 29-Oct-08/1:20 PM
PUT THIS IN THE TATE MODERN. WHAT ARE YOU ABOUT? IS THIS POEM A MIDDLE AGED NEW YORK FEM? WHERE DOES IT WANT? IF ANY? NOT FOR ME BUT EXPLAIN CAUSE I CANNIE SEE THE COLOUR[COLOR, FOR YOU IN THE U.S.]




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