Re: Cupid promised me, Nadine by Shardik	Engelbert Humpalot 194.154.22.54	10-Aug-06/10:11 AM
This is ungrammatical and very poorly written. The punctuation is bad as well. If I were rude I would say it stinks. It stinks.
Re: Brackish by <~>	Engelbert Humpalot 194.154.22.54	10-Aug-06/10:13 AM
This shows some promise but its content is far outweighed by its length. Edit, edit and then edit again.
Re: Old Friends by sliver	Engelbert Humpalot 194.154.22.54	10-Aug-06/10:14 AM
Quite nice really. Innocent and charming. Like me.
Re: 'Till Then by sliver	Engelbert Humpalot 194.154.22.54	10-Aug-06/10:16 AM
Nicely written but a little too sentmental for me. I would have given it 9/10 except for the spelling mistake.... "Goodby" doesn't exist. The plural of goodbye is goodbyes
Re: Life Goes On by Edna Sweetlove	Engelbert Humpalot 194.154.22.54	10-Aug-06/10:18 AM
Sloppy shit but a very funny ending. I pissed my pants at that.
Re: Divorcing Tennessee by Dovina	Engelbert Humpalot 194.154.22.54	10-Aug-06/10:20 AM
Slop.
Re: Fragrant Love by Engelbert Humpalot	Edna Sweetlove 81.179.82.204	10-Aug-06/11:40 AM
What a charming little tale. It reminds me of my late husband Bert. He would often get home late at night reeking of cheap aftershave after some nameless activities in the park with his bumboy friends.
Re: Mr. Pig's Theme by Mr. Pig	Edna Sweetlove 81.179.82.204	10-Aug-06/11:46 AM
Lovely.
Re: Guilt Trip by thepinkbunnyofdoom	Edna Sweetlove 81.179.82.204	10-Aug-06/11:48 AM
Crap.
Re: Love Squirts by wFraser Allonby Q.C.w	Edna Sweetlove 81.179.82.204	10-Aug-06/11:50 AM
You bumboy friends will have a rough passage.
Re: fuck you by gsosville	leonxic 70.244.48.17	10-Aug-06/1:21 PM
I think that comma should be a semicolon. The poem will still be real shitty, but at least it will look better.
regarding some deleted poem...	A db C 217.40.63.105	11-Aug-06/6:21 AM
I don't really understand much of this which is somewhat in keeping with the title. Living in Cambridge myself it is a nice place to go, which is quite comprehensibile which is why it is incomprehensible in a poem that seems to be supposed to be incomprehensible if you see what I mean.
Re: Something More by drnick	A db C 217.40.63.105	11-Aug-06/6:25 AM
Soothingly introspective, the lines You can only slow a force of nature. Like an avalanche arrive in the chaos. broke away from that soothing tone somewhat and whilst I see their necessity I cant precislely put my finger on it, but there is something that stops me giving this a 10 within those lines.
Re: Black and Orange by Enkidu	A db C 217.40.63.105	11-Aug-06/6:28 AM
Very good last line and first verse
Re: Freud Spoke Of A Mother's Tongue, But I Interpret Dreams by Ranger	A db C 217.40.63.105	11-Aug-06/6:30 AM
sophisticated
Re: bimby by sneakerpimp	A db C 217.40.63.105	11-Aug-06/6:32 AM
does this make sense? The passion you pretended was precociously to obtain
Re: Little Miss Muff by Spider-Man	A db C 217.40.63.105	11-Aug-06/6:33 AM
oh dear
Re: Something More by drnick	drnick 24.176.22.254	11-Aug-06/8:17 AM
fuck, it should say "you need to lose.", not "you need to loose."
Re: The Girl With the Tye-Dyed Hair by wilco	Edna Sweetlove 85.210.6.93	11-Aug-06/12:06 PM
Interesting narrative but a cop-out ending.
Re: Reminder of Failure by Miggy	Edna Sweetlove 85.210.6.93	11-Aug-06/12:08 PM
A bit Lenny Cohen-ny!