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bimby (Free verse) by sneakerpimp
Words have all but left me, my thoughts create an abyss
i am blind, deaf and dump with love. All I apprehend
is not enough. Remembering you, all my feeling descend
time that i have shared with you, hours of bliss
And time fades as does passion from kiss to kiss
Love is to long a pain. The passion you pretended
was precociously to obtain, but when the charm has ended
the charmer you disdain. In sharing this I do resist.
I still love you from the bottom of my broken
heart, it was absolute we would one day be parted
you and I both intelligibly knew it would not last.
Promises that you made, I wish had not been spoken
you loved me from the beginning. It shouldnât have started.
Though the present I regret Im grateful for the past.
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Posted: January 21, 2004 6:50 AM PST; Last modified: January 21, 2004 6:50 AM PST
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