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Free verse № 57541

The man

by highnightmaregurl

Member since 2003 · Posted 25 Jul 2003 · 2 comments

Follow the man, He knows the way, Hes got your plan. It's planned out, Day by day. You may not like it, There's no doubt. It's right for you though, It's all planned out. Follow the man, He knows the way, He'll get you there, Even if you don't pray Your prayer. Don't shed a tear, He's there. Ready to take you there. He is the man, Follow him, He has your plan.

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[7] DurtKL 25-Jul-03/1:05 PM Reply
"even if you don't pray your prayer"
why not take out prayer

Dammit Woman
Stop following the man!
jk
continue
[1] <{Baba^Yaga}> 25-Jul-03/1:23 PM Reply
He-pan (Free cookware) by ahighgurl


Master's of the Tuniverse
Follow He-pan,
He knows the way,
Hes got your eggs.
It's He-panned out,
Day by day.
You may not like em,
There's no yolk.
It's right for toast,
Or rump roast.
Follow He-pan,
He snaps the training bra,
He'll get you boobs up,
Even if you don't nipple mouth
Your prayer.
Don't shed a tupperware,
He's air.
Ready to take your pussy hair.
An floss
He is the He-pan,
Follow him,
He has the secret knock
to get to Skilletor.