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The man (Free verse) by highnightmaregurl

Follow the man, He knows the way, Hes got your plan. It's planned out, Day by day. You may not like it, There's no doubt. It's right for you though, It's all planned out. Follow the man, He knows the way, He'll get you there, Even if you don't pray Your prayer. Don't shed a tear, He's there. Ready to take you there. He is the man, Follow him, He has your plan.

DurtKL 25-Jul-03/1:05 PM
"even if you don't pray your prayer"
why not take out prayer

Dammit Woman
Stop following the man!
jk
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