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bimby (Free verse) by sneakerpimp

Words have all but left me, my thoughts create an abyss i am blind, deaf and dump with love. All I apprehend is not enough. Remembering you, all my feeling descend time that i have shared with you, hours of bliss And time fades as does passion from kiss to kiss Love is to long a pain. The passion you pretended was precociously to obtain, but when the charm has ended the charmer you disdain. In sharing this I do resist. I still love you from the bottom of my broken heart, it was absolute we would one day be parted you and I both intelligibly knew it would not last. Promises that you made, I wish had not been spoken you loved me from the beginning. It shouldn’t have started. Though the present I regret Im grateful for the past.

mr cunt 21-Apr-07/5:20 PM
Not very good is it?




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