Re: Bobjim, Jimbob by Spider-Man	mindsigns 63.100.108.20	9-Aug-06/12:45 AM
I usually like disgusting humorous shit , but this one made me a little sick to my stomach, maybe that's the point.
Re: Chickens by rnuk	mindsigns 152.163.100.65	9-Aug-06/8:11 AM
Brilliant, simple and to the point. The ending is classic. Now I know about Marxism. Thanks.
regarding some deleted poem...	A db C 217.40.63.105	9-Aug-06/8:29 AM
Superb relaxed dull thudding tone that causes dropped attention towards the end of the piece
Re: Children of Wolves by Caducus	A db C 217.40.63.105	9-Aug-06/8:32 AM
Ive read a few of your pieces now and this is by far and away the best out of the 5 or so that I read (It shrieked as if it knew is a great line)
Re: Chickens by rnuk	amanda_dcosta 202.164.140.158	9-Aug-06/9:00 AM
Cool poem and idea. Looking out for more.
Re: Chickens by rnuk	ALChemy 71.75.188.163	9-Aug-06/9:39 AM
Dang Commy chickens.
Re: Cataclysm and Echo by MacFrantic	A db C 217.40.63.105	10-Aug-06/12:59 AM
Very echo like and poetic
Re: Gracy (An ode to my greyhound) by mindsigns	amanda_dcosta 219.93.174.102	10-Aug-06/4:19 AM
Could have been better.
Re: On the subject of being poor by Stephen Robins	A db C 217.40.63.105	10-Aug-06/6:09 AM
Harsh
Re: 1a. Awaken by A db C	amanda_dcosta 202.164.140.158	10-Aug-06/6:09 AM
I've read this a couple of times... but I feel this has to be presented better. You have good material, but somehow I don't find it very appealing. And P.S. welcome to Poemranker. Enjoy.
Re: fish eye pie by calliope	A db C 217.40.63.105	10-Aug-06/6:17 AM
The breaks in the line create an interesting disjointed feel to the piece which eminates quality through its perspective. I dont really like the theme and the last verse, the theme is not really comical or serious, and the skills you have shown in conveying the feel of this conversation I feel are better placed to write about different topics. If I had liked the theme I would have given this a 10 for the way you have captured the communication between these two fishing women (maybe I have missed the point of this piece a little). This piece has drawn me in enougth to want to have a look at some of your other piece. Please dont take my opinion too far to heart since I am wrong more often than not these days.
Re: self-righteousness by calliope	A db C 217.40.63.105	10-Aug-06/6:19 AM
I have to agree with Ranger here "I think I get it".
Re: Aristocrats(Madlib for all those shock poets) by ALChemy	Edna Sweetlove 81.178.76.60	10-Aug-06/6:56 AM
I see little point in retailing an unoriginal and censored version of the world's stalest joke. I wish I could give this lower than zero. You should be ashamed of yourself. It's neither funny, nor rude, nor anything else. If you want an offensive joke, ask me. Here's a sample of a slightly offensive one. Q. What's the difference between an Israeli soldier and a bucket of shit? A. The handle.
Re: Skellington Bakery by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	Edna Sweetlove 81.178.76.60	10-Aug-06/7:23 AM
Long-winded but learned.
regarding some deleted poem...	Edna Sweetlove 81.178.76.60	10-Aug-06/7:27 AM
Placards. Not placcards. You seem to have something against Muslims, just because they hate Jews perhaps. Well, not all Muslims and not all Jews. The Muslims who have been thrown out of their land by the people who call themselves Israelis, probably hate Jews.
Re: Southern Baptist Redneck Song by Edna Sweetlove	Engelbert Humpalot 194.154.22.54	10-Aug-06/10:04 AM
Excellent. I love to laugh at rednecks.
Re: All Hail! All Hail! America The Golden! by Edna Sweetlove	Engelbert Humpalot 194.154.22.54	10-Aug-06/10:05 AM
Malicious genius!
Re: A Sexy Crucifixion Poem by Edna Sweetlove	Engelbert Humpalot 194.154.22.54	10-Aug-06/10:07 AM
I laughed so hard I pissed my Y-fronts.
Re: A Poem For George Bush by Edna Sweetlove	Engelbert Humpalot 194.154.22.54	10-Aug-06/10:08 AM
You could do a similar one for that repulsive Condo Rice. She makes me puke.
Re: The Queen Mum - A Tribute by Edna Sweetlove	Engelbert Humpalot 194.154.22.54	10-Aug-06/10:09 AM
Very fucking amusing.