Could have been better.

I usually like disgusting humorous shit , but this one made me a little sick to my stomach, maybe that's the point.

Ive read a few of your pieces now and this is by far and away the best out of the 5 or so that I read (It shrieked as if it knew is a great line)

Cool poem and idea. Looking out for more.

Dang Commy chickens.

Harsh

I've read this a couple of times... but I feel this has to be presented better. You have good material, but somehow I don't find it very appealing. And P.S. welcome to Poemranker. Enjoy.

The breaks in the line create an interesting disjointed feel to the piece which eminates quality through its perspective. I dont really like the theme and the last verse, the theme is not really comical or serious, and the skills you have shown in conveying the feel of this conversation I feel are better placed to write about different topics. If I had liked the theme I would have given this a 10 for the way you have captured the communication between these two fishing women (maybe I have missed the point of this piece a little). This piece has drawn me in enougth to want to have a look at some of your other piece. Please dont take my opinion too far to heart since I am wrong more often than not these days.

I have to agree with Ranger here "I think I get it".

Brilliant, simple and to the point. The ending is classic. Now I know about Marxism. Thanks.

Superb relaxed dull thudding tone that causes dropped attention towards the end of the piece

Very echo like and poetic

I see little point in retailing an unoriginal and censored version of the world's stalest joke. I wish I could give this lower than zero. You should be ashamed of yourself. It's neither funny, nor rude, nor anything else. If you want an offensive joke, ask me. Here's a sample of a slightly offensive one. Q. What's the difference between an Israeli soldier and a bucket of shit? A. The handle.

Long-winded but learned.

Placards. Not placcards. You seem to have something against Muslims, just because they hate Jews perhaps. Well, not all Muslims and not all Jews. The Muslims who have been thrown out of their land by the people who call themselves Israelis, probably hate Jews.

Excellent. I love to laugh at rednecks.

Malicious genius!

I laughed so hard I pissed my Y-fronts.

You could do a similar one for that repulsive Condo Rice. She makes me puke.

Very fucking amusing.