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Cataclysm and Echo

Member since 2003 · Posted 9 Aug 2006 · 1 comment

Particles resonate over the water, causing elliptical blemishes. Merry, frenetic streams rush into the smoke; they infest the viscous wild. And here the world becomes of memory. To cross the staggered threshold is laboring: we keep our heads up and continue to miss what is ahead. Ill-begotten greatness washes over the ill bodies. The ground swells and depresses to a splintered dirge— song with so much an echo as silence. Remand this grief with every breath, and shake the terror from your shoulders. All is yes, lost.

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[9] A db C 10-Aug-06/12:59 AM Reply
Very echo like and poetic