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Cataclysm and Echo (Free verse) by MacFrantic
Particles resonate over the water,
causing elliptical blemishes.
Merry, frenetic streams rush into the smoke;
they infest the viscous wild. And here
the world becomes of memory.
To cross the staggered threshold is
laboring: we keep our heads up and continue
to miss what is ahead.
Ill-begotten greatness washes over the ill bodies.
The ground swells and depresses to a splintered dirgeâ
song with so much an echo as silence.
Remand this grief with every breath, and
shake the terror from your shoulders.
All is yes, lost.
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.5
Weighted score: 4.976287
Overall Rank: 8255
Posted: August 9, 2006 1:39 PM PDT; Last modified: August 9, 2006 1:40 PM PDT
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