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Black and Orange (Free verse) by Enkidu
This fire inside my head, it feels as if my ashen mind is falling victim to the flaming sky. I dream of nothing and your face, but reflecting in your eyes an ever changing color comes surprise. The quite groaning turns my head To make quite sure my life's not dead. I dream in black and orange just for you. But is it true? I know I dream damnation just for you.

Up the ladder: Darkest Room
Down the ladder: Diaries of tears

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.3333335
Weighted score: 5.0397344
Overall Rank: 7148
Posted: August 11, 2006 2:09 AM PDT; Last modified: August 11, 2006 2:09 AM PDT
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[8] A db C @ 217.40.63.105 | 11-Aug-06/6:28 AM | Reply
Very good last line and first verse
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