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Black and Orange (Free verse) by Enkidu

This fire inside my head, it feels as if my ashen mind is falling victim to the flaming sky. I dream of nothing and your face, but reflecting in your eyes an ever changing color comes surprise. The quite groaning turns my head To make quite sure my life's not dead. I dream in black and orange just for you. But is it true? I know I dream damnation just for you.

A db C 11-Aug-06/6:28 AM
Very good last line and first verse




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