on The Land of Back-to-Front by [mojo]
11 Nov 2002, 12:23 PM
very impressive...extremely imaginative and full of cheer...definitely for the kids, but more in a doonsebury-ish way. here's a 9 because i didn't agree with one stanza.r
on Light Entertainment by flanners
11 Nov 2002, 12:13 PM
if i had a hoof i'd make the sign of jesu over you and spit in the wind...my spit would then transform intself into a shopping cart full of kale...i then would load up my kale gun(borrowed of course from bachus [rented actually]) and really give you the kind of calcium injection that you deserve..a thick and rich nutrient laden blast..of greeness for..well your greeness. you disgust even yoda.k
on gerbil by betty swallox
11 Nov 2002, 12:07 PM
mint.
on crush on you by bxjay170
11 Nov 2002, 12:05 PM
the key to all of this...is more than lust..it's the shape of your vanerial warts and your venetian blinds...make a thug weak? are you pulling my leg, just come clean man..admit it! you have bitch tits.0.c
on Shwe Nat by shwenatjadeflower
10 Nov 2002, 7:00 PM
fucking hilarious. ha!ha! 10.
on Charcoal haven by Service
10 Nov 2002, 6:18 PM
this is the mad russian witches choice of the evening when it comes to tap water filtering devices we should all leave our charcoal havens behind..here's a 10. use it to house train a puppy, or to save the planet if you'd like.??
replying on Necromantic Boo-boo by razorgrin
7 Nov 2002, 3:23 PM
you're funny. have fun.
on ... by logun2002ya
7 Nov 2002, 3:05 PM
lose the last bound, and it's practically normal. almost 6.??
on Necromantic Boo-boo by razorgrin
7 Nov 2002, 3:01 PM
what did you think of that movie the ring? i mean it's not quite dario argento or dawn of the dead or anything, but in its own way. i thought it was unique and disturbing..that movie fucked my head up a bit..i had migrains and nightmares, and i'm a horror movie nut..it really effected my subconscious in odd ways to say the least...creepy. indeed. 8.h
on Killing spree by UAFANTHORPEY
7 Nov 2002, 2:52 PM
i was having a blast up until the last two stanzas..only because the joy of killing needs no explanation just more volunteers.t
on Perversions by razorgrin
7 Nov 2002, 2:22 PM
darling...i see a wonderfull future for you in my bengied chickens entrails...lovely! 9.
on i am genius personified by bondjedi
6 Nov 2002, 3:22 PM
better. better keep faking it. clod. 8.
on Cantos part mmx (The Mud Poem) by bondjedi
6 Nov 2002, 3:20 PM
this is shit. pun or no pun. 0.
on You'll Never Hear by confuzdlilgirl
5 Nov 2002, 5:24 PM
because you taste like flat soda in a sock...quite frankly.4.???
on Elegy for Lonnie Donegan by Nicholas Jones
5 Nov 2002, 2:49 PM
foghorns are made out of t-rex's footprints and walpole's skunk stripe white. here's a nine for ya! 9. i still don't like you very much though.??
on Hells Game by Katie
5 Nov 2002, 2:44 PM
change all of the "yous" to toaster. and the "yours" to pickle-bumps. carry on.??
on .:|bittersweet|:. by emman
5 Nov 2002, 2:41 PM
yes.this piece also is worth its weight in gold. a binding read through and through. 9.w
on .:|Mindfucked|:. by emman
5 Nov 2002, 2:38 PM
this is quite charming and true. 10.??
on Suburban Horror by phbiscuit
4 Nov 2002, 1:20 AM
to hell add to hell at the end and it would be a sonic sonnet..here's a 7.
on At the Bottom of a Well by phbiscuit
4 Nov 2002, 1:18 AM
YOU LIE! i see the ring from the bottom of the well! THE RING! and little girls with wet hair and horses and carlos castenada and snoopy? unfortunately this was extremely boring, but the ring wasn't..thank god for naomi watts. watts upo!@ 5.