Re: a comment on St. Germain & The Charismatically Uncomitted by <{Baba^Yaga}>	20-Nov-02/9:51 AM
she gives you all tens too. fucking cry baby..why don't you go find something more constructive to do..like tie a noose. idiots.
Re: I'm a homicidal kind of guy (spoof of every 'down-home' song you've ever heard) by Yardbird	18-Nov-02/10:42 AM
throttling is fun and good for hangovers...and spain..well. a pleasent enough place for cranium lobs...nice song. 8.
Re: Dreaming by TripleHGurl	18-Nov-02/10:37 AM
that's swell, but i fucking hate wrestling, t.v dinners...and dreamers.6
Re: Bowstones, 21st June 200 by Nicholas Jones	18-Nov-02/10:36 AM
you sure light (i mean like) street lights i was hooked from the first parenthesied part..than it got a bit mono for med...not that monos bad, but don't you ever get out of the dark of winter FUCK! you're breaking my guitar strings over here for christ sake what? do you need a post card or something? here borrow my pea coat. 7.
Re: It started with a kiss by little_angel_maria	18-Nov-02/10:28 AM
the aroma of your lynx? (possibly brilliant) and just when i needed you mouth..is pretty extravagent also...slut. 6.
Re: Bloody Sonner by The Eskimo King	18-Nov-02/10:25 AM
call this hemoglobin blues, but replace every word blood with smegma...that is all. flush!
Re: untitled#3 by darby pyn	18-Nov-02/10:22 AM
superb. 8.
Re: The Breathing Dead by Caducus	18-Nov-02/10:22 AM
stanzas three and four should have there last coma'd statements underneath...it looks lame extending out to the side that way..still a powerful sentiment. take this rabbit and find it a hat. 6.
Re: A lighthouse by emilyowey	18-Nov-02/10:12 AM
i just queefed, while cleaning out my cat's ear with my four inch pinky nail.5.
Re: I Cry by casey	17-Nov-02/9:42 PM
i enjoy the verb and noun tweaks, but that's about it. 6...and also. i don't believe you.
Re: e-mail from a friend by josh_5o	15-Nov-02/12:19 AM
right!?try....laying on the freeway and counting differential gears...works every time.7.
Re: Sisters of mercy by strider1	15-Nov-02/12:17 AM
next.
Re: Sisters of mercy by strider1	15-Nov-02/12:17 AM
next.
Re: "so called" reality by jonny2000	15-Nov-02/12:15 AM
no, and if we did? what would you do then...eat the blue pill and join dogstar with mr. reeves? why does a bum shopping cart the recycling bin...if there's no hope...to buy dope to cope? nay...to tongue hole the flat pop...before the ants do.
Re: a comment on Colony by <{Baba^Yaga}>	13-Nov-02/6:13 PM
as long as i can sound it all out. i don't lose to much sleep over it. spelling that is. except for the squaw i mean..that one has got me a little peived.
Re: a comment on Colony by <{Baba^Yaga}>	13-Nov-02/1:06 PM
yeah..what shimmer's through unfortunately is "truth" with an interesting twist called 'metaphor reversals' by accepting the dark you find the light...the white mans time will come..just watch africa go. whitey will be growing and pulling cotton and floating face first through thee rapids of his own undoings in no tima at all in fact it's already happening..i meant no offense..towards you and your wife, and happen to bed quite knowledgable when it comes to the total history of migrating nomadic tribes from all ages and continents...hence. my background in anthropology and history.
Re: Tainted by darby pyn	12-Nov-02/4:20 PM
this is priceless, and extrordinarilly keen. keen on what? the vagina and gutters. have a 10.
Re: TWO STAR WARS FANS by UAFANTHORPEY	12-Nov-02/4:11 PM
i think the last line should be replaced by "in the shape of a post it stamp 'pon his lightsaber" or some shite like that.here's a nine, the last act though needs work still just a bit... barely.
Re: licking my tongue by w~* ATHENA *~w	12-Nov-02/3:37 PM
that's a hoot.almost a torch song. 8.
Re: me by spazzman15	12-Nov-02/3:34 PM
lose the tonight at the end...not bad though...for a spazz. 7.