replying on St. Germain & The Charismatically Uncomitted by <{Baba^Yaga}>
20 Nov 2002, 9:51 AM
she gives you all tens too. fucking cry baby..why don't you go find something more constructive to do..like tie a noose. idiots.
on I'm a homicidal kind of guy (spoof of every 'down-home' song you've ever heard) by Yardbird
18 Nov 2002, 10:42 AM
throttling is fun and good for hangovers...and spain..well. a pleasent enough place for cranium lobs...nice song. 8.
on Dreaming by TripleHGurl
18 Nov 2002, 10:37 AM
that's swell, but i fucking hate wrestling, t.v dinners...and dreamers.6
on Bowstones, 21st June 200 by Nicholas Jones
18 Nov 2002, 10:36 AM
you sure light (i mean like) street lights i was hooked from the first parenthesied part..than it got a bit mono for med...not that monos bad, but don't you ever get out of the dark of winter FUCK! you're breaking my guitar strings over here for christ sake what? do you need a post card or something? here borrow my pea coat. 7.
on It started with a kiss by little_angel_maria
18 Nov 2002, 10:28 AM
the aroma of your lynx? (possibly brilliant) and just when i needed you mouth..is pretty extravagent also...slut. 6.
on Bloody Sonner by The Eskimo King
18 Nov 2002, 10:25 AM
call this hemoglobin blues, but replace every word blood with smegma...that is all. flush!
on untitled#3 by darby pyn
18 Nov 2002, 10:22 AM
superb. 8.
on The Breathing Dead by Caducus
18 Nov 2002, 10:22 AM
stanzas three and four should have there last coma'd statements underneath...it looks lame extending out to the side that way..still a powerful sentiment. take this rabbit and find it a hat. 6.
on A lighthouse by emilyowey
18 Nov 2002, 10:12 AM
i just queefed, while cleaning out my cat's ear with my four inch pinky nail.5.
on e-mail from a friend by josh_5o
15 Nov 2002, 12:19 AM
right!?try....laying on the freeway and counting differential gears...works every time.7.
on Sisters of mercy by strider1
15 Nov 2002, 12:17 AM
next.
on Sisters of mercy by strider1
15 Nov 2002, 12:17 AM
next.
on "so called" reality by jonny2000
15 Nov 2002, 12:15 AM
no, and if we did? what would you do then...eat the blue pill and join dogstar with mr. reeves? why does a bum shopping cart the recycling bin...if there's no hope...to buy dope to cope? nay...to tongue hole the flat pop...before the ants do.
replying on Colony by <{Baba^Yaga}>
13 Nov 2002, 6:13 PM
as long as i can sound it all out. i don't lose to much sleep over it. spelling that is. except for the squaw i mean..that one has got me a little peived.
replying on Colony by <{Baba^Yaga}>
13 Nov 2002, 1:06 PM
yeah..what shimmer's through unfortunately is "truth" with an interesting twist called 'metaphor reversals' by accepting the dark you find the light...the white mans time will come..just watch africa go. whitey will be growing and pulling cotton and floating face first through thee rapids of his own undoings in no tima at all in fact it's already happening..i meant no offense..towards you and your wife, and happen to bed quite knowledgable when it comes to the total history of migrating nomadic tribes from all ages and continents...hence. my background in anthropology and history.
on TWO STAR WARS FANS by UAFANTHORPEY
12 Nov 2002, 4:11 PM
i think the last line should be replaced by "in the shape of a post it stamp 'pon his lightsaber" or some shite like that.here's a nine, the last act though needs work still just a bit... barely.
on licking my tongue by w~* ATHENA *~w
12 Nov 2002, 3:37 PM
that's a hoot.almost a torch song. 8.
on me by spazzman15
12 Nov 2002, 3:34 PM
lose the tonight at the end...not bad though...for a spazz. 7.