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Tainted (Free verse) by darby pyn
Shelter disquised as a tight embrace between two thighs with no disgrace between two eyes looking through my face. vulnerable diet of shy discretion swelled my appetite for a loose direction. indulge in every impulse locked consequences couldn't stop a faceless figure with extended fingers reaching for my soul like gospel singers. baptized in a sweat soaked dream a paper boat in a street curb stream.


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Arithmetic Mean: 6.75
Weighted score: 5.2086053
Overall Rank: 4435
Posted: November 12, 2002 1:16 PM PST; Last modified: November 12, 2002 1:16 PM PST
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[8] <~> @ 167.206.181.179 | 12-Nov-02/1:30 PM | Reply
damn. fine. work. leaves me wanting more
[10] <{Baba^Yaga}> @ 24.126.113.154 | 12-Nov-02/4:20 PM | Reply
this is priceless, and extrordinarilly keen. keen on what? the vagina and gutters. have a 10.
[n/a] darby pyn @ 152.163.188.7 > <{Baba^Yaga}> | 13-Nov-02/9:30 AM | Reply
thank you.
[9] deleted user @ 208.25.247.94 | 31-Jan-04/4:04 PM | Reply
i gave you a 9 i almost didnt read it but something about it cault my eye...i really like this.
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