Tainted

Member since 2002 · Posted 12 Nov 2002 · 4 comments

Shelter disquised as a tight embrace between two thighs with no disgrace between two eyes looking through my face. vulnerable diet of shy discretion swelled my appetite for a loose direction. indulge in every impulse locked consequences couldn't stop a faceless figure with extended fingers reaching for my soul like gospel singers. baptized in a sweat soaked dream a paper boat in a street curb stream.

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[8] <~> 12-Nov-02/1:30 PM Reply

damn. fine. work. leaves me wanting more

[10] <{Baba^Yaga}> 12-Nov-02/4:20 PM Reply

this is priceless, and extrordinarilly keen. keen on what? the vagina and gutters. have a 10.

[n/a] darby pyn › <{Baba^Yaga}> 13-Nov-02/9:30 AM Reply

thank you.

[9] deleted user 31-Jan-04/4:04 PM Reply

i gave you a 9 i almost didnt read it but something about it cault my eye...i really like this.