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Tainted (Free verse) by darby pyn Shelter disquised as a tight embrace between
two thighs with no disgrace between two eyes
looking through my face. vulnerable diet of
shy discretion swelled my appetite for a loose
direction. indulge in every impulse locked
consequences couldn't stop a faceless figure
with extended fingers reaching for my soul
like gospel singers. baptized in a sweat
soaked dream a paper boat in a street curb
stream.
Up the ladder:
bitterness to tenderness to endlessness
Down the ladder:
The Poem, The Explanation, The Goodbye
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Posted: November 12, 2002 1:16 PM PST; Last modified: November 12, 2002 1:16 PM PSTWeighted score: 5.2086053 Overall Rank: 4435 Comments:
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12-Nov-02/1:30 PM
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damn. fine. work. leaves me wanting more
this is priceless, and extrordinarilly keen. keen on what? the vagina and gutters. have a 10.
thank you.
i gave you a 9 i almost didnt read it but something about it cault my eye...i really like this.
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