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Tainted (Free verse) by darby pyn

Shelter disquised as a tight embrace between two thighs with no disgrace between two eyes looking through my face. vulnerable diet of shy discretion swelled my appetite for a loose direction. indulge in every impulse locked consequences couldn't stop a faceless figure with extended fingers reaching for my soul like gospel singers. baptized in a sweat soaked dream a paper boat in a street curb stream.

<{Baba^Yaga}> 12-Nov-02/4:20 PM
this is priceless, and extrordinarilly keen. keen on what? the vagina and gutters. have a 10.




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