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Dreaming (Free verse) by TripleHGurl
During the day
I soar across the sky
I visit other places,
Places no one's ever been
I see things people can't see,
Things people are to blind to see
I wonder why
Why those people can't see them
Things that we can see
I soar through the clouds with a feeling
A feeling nothing can hurt me
A feeling I could overcome anything
That feeling is you
People believe the world is all bad,
Nothing ever goes right
So during the day
I'll wonder
Why
Why no one can see these wonderful things
The things that you and I can see
I'll wonder
Always wondering
About you
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Arithmetic Mean: 2.857143
Weighted score: 4.423697
Overall Rank: 12945
Posted: October 11, 2002 12:05 PM PDT; Last modified: October 28, 2002 12:25 PM PST
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