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Dreaming (Free verse) by TripleHGurl
During the day I soar across the sky I visit other places, Places no one's ever been I see things people can't see, Things people are to blind to see I wonder why Why those people can't see them Things that we can see I soar through the clouds with a feeling A feeling nothing can hurt me A feeling I could overcome anything That feeling is you People believe the world is all bad, Nothing ever goes right So during the day I'll wonder Why Why no one can see these wonderful things The things that you and I can see I'll wonder Always wondering About you

Up the ladder: Forgettable
Down the ladder: August and everyt'ing after

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Arithmetic Mean: 2.857143
Weighted score: 4.423697
Overall Rank: 12940
Posted: October 11, 2002 12:05 PM PDT; Last modified: October 28, 2002 12:25 PM PST
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[6] <{Baba^Yaga}> @ 24.126.113.154 | 18-Nov-02/10:37 AM | Reply
that's swell, but i fucking hate wrestling, t.v dinners...and dreamers.6
[5] Caducus @ 62.105.88.10 | 22-Nov-02/6:36 AM | Reply
I've been through the clouds too.

thanks to jack daniels
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