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Forgettable (Free verse) by Angelofpain25
I can't remember you face,
And I ask myself; how did I let this escape?
Why can't I even see you far away?
Is that how shallow I became?
That I don't even have the respect
To hold onto you, and keep you within myself?
Yet no matter how hard I try,
I can't even point out your star,
For that I can't be forgiven.
I can't allow my mind to forget,
Just because you're absent,
Am I supposed to neglect?.
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Arithmetic Mean: 2.857143
Weighted score: 4.423697
Overall Rank: 12944
Posted: August 21, 2002 4:08 PM PDT; Last modified: August 21, 2002 4:08 PM PDT
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