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Forgettable (Free verse) by Angelofpain25
I can't remember you face, And I ask myself; how did I let this escape? Why can't I even see you far away? Is that how shallow I became? That I don't even have the respect To hold onto you, and keep you within myself? Yet no matter how hard I try, I can't even point out your star, For that I can't be forgiven. I can't allow my mind to forget, Just because you're absent, Am I supposed to neglect?.

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Arithmetic Mean: 2.857143
Weighted score: 4.423697
Overall Rank: 12944
Posted: August 21, 2002 4:08 PM PDT; Last modified: August 21, 2002 4:08 PM PDT
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[1] Fearlesfan_04 @ 129.66.1.202 | 24-Feb-05/6:49 PM | Reply
uh... at least i get what you're trying to say....
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