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The Only Solution (Free verse) by Angelofpain25 I already find myself with the right answer.
The answer to the end of my misery.
The answer which is held at the tip of this knife.
The painful answer that will rid my body of all this sadness inside.
The solution that will take me to the place where I belong.
The place where I'll be happy, and where I wont have to deal with any
judgement.
This painful but sweet rush is my only solution.
And for every drop of blood from my body; I can see the ending of my
suffering closer,
As the carpet around me gets covered with my red spirit.
My new life will start as soon as the tip of the knife, reaches the
other end of my veins.
Then and only then, will all my suffering and pain be ceased.
Up the ladder:
Disregardance
Down the ladder:
Forgettable
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 2.857143
Posted: August 21, 2002 11:27 AM PDT; Last modified: August 21, 2002 11:28 AM PDTWeighted score: 4.423697 Overall Rank: 12938 Comments:
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razorgrin @ 142.166.107.253
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21-Aug-02/2:09 PM
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just kill yourself and spare us your angst. No one will miss you. Not even your cat.
Oh, my, goodness, don't listen to him, i don't know you yet-YET- but I will miss you if you die, don't kill yourself. and you are wrong, they judge you everywhere, heaven or hell or valhalla, wherever you believe you'll go after you die...it isn't the right answer to your obvious problems. your suffering won't end, if you commit suicide you'll go to hell, and there it is only eternal suffering. so, don't kill yourself, one: it isn't the end of your suffering, and two: you'd be wasting talent as a poet. lol. i hope you see that it isn't right to kill yourself, it isn't,or shouldn't be any persons choice about the time of anyone elses or thier own death. i will be looking for more poetry from you. love, jade. :)
There is no hell. There is no hell. There is no hell. There is no hell. There is no hell. Kill yourself. It's the only solution. The only problem is, you're too weak. You weak, worthless nobody. Only kidding! have a great time on poemeranker!!
What's up? well this is an old poem guys so a lot of things have changed since then...well not a lot but some...loved getting the replies, they gave me one hell of a laugh lol...and jade thank you for your reply I would love to hear more from you and I like the poems that i've read from you so far.
But, "in all seriousness", any person has the right to kill themselves whenever they fucking want. There may be reasons why they "shouldn't" (like other obligations), but ceteris paribus there's no justification for forbidding killing yourself. You should be ashamed of yourself for trying to force people into your horrible, horrible, horrible, horrible, horrible religion, "jade".
cud have done better i feel.
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