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"so called" reality (Free verse) by jonny2000
you awake, the night has past your eyes, the sun shines greetings, but your nightly dreams have given you lies, of happiness, and sadness, terror and demise, its time to greet "so called" reality, the real pain, the real lies, the real glad, and yes the bad, do we really know for sure, if what we hear, see, touch, and smell the "so called" reality, or is this our lie, past on for millennia, do we really know? . . . . . . . .

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.2222223
Weighted score: 5.611111
Overall Rank: 2261
Posted: November 14, 2002 4:12 PM PST; Last modified: November 14, 2002 4:12 PM PST
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[6] <{Baba^Yaga}> @ 24.126.113.154 | 15-Nov-02/12:15 AM | Reply
no, and if we did? what would you do then...eat the blue pill and join dogstar with mr. reeves? why does a bum shopping cart the recycling bin...if there's no hope...to buy dope to cope? nay...to tongue hole the flat pop...before the ants do.
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