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Free verse № 25222

"so called" reality

Member since 2002 · Posted 14 Nov 2002 · 1 comment

you awake, the night has past your eyes, the sun shines greetings, but your nightly dreams have given you lies, of happiness, and sadness, terror and demise, its time to greet "so called" reality, the real pain, the real lies, the real glad, and yes the bad, do we really know for sure, if what we hear, see, touch, and smell the "so called" reality, or is this our lie, past on for millennia, do we really know? . . . . . . . .

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[6] <{Baba^Yaga}> 15-Nov-02/12:15 AM Reply
no, and if we did? what would you do then...eat the blue pill and join dogstar with mr. reeves? why does a bum shopping cart the recycling bin...if there's no hope...to buy dope to cope? nay...to tongue hole the flat pop...before the ants do.