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me (Lyric) by spazzman15
Chorus: Id rather be a fish than a bird Id rather stay silent Than say a single word I have a cell phone but nobody calls Ill cry you a river But not waterfalls I have a car but nowhere to go I love my music But theres no radio Id rather read a book than watch TV Id rather swim below Than sail atop the sea Chorus: I guess Im different is that okay? Id rather pick one rose Than buy a whole bouquet Id love to swim and have no wings And use my imagination To catch the conscience of the kings Chorus: Im happy this way I dont need to change I know it may seem Like Im a little strange But its all good and its all right You live your life And Ill live mine tonight

Up the ladder: going
Down the ladder: A Tale of Peter Pan

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.75
Weighted score: 5.201706
Overall Rank: 4487
Posted: November 12, 2002 1:35 PM PST; Last modified: November 12, 2002 1:35 PM PST
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Comments:
[6] <~> @ 167.206.181.179 | 12-Nov-02/1:42 PM | Reply
i'd rather be a hammer than a nail, and the play's the thing to catch a king....
[7] <{Baba^Yaga}> @ 24.126.113.154 | 12-Nov-02/3:34 PM | Reply
lose the tonight at the end...not bad though...for a spazz. 7.
[10] Caducus @ 62.105.88.10 | 13-Nov-02/9:32 AM | Reply
7/10 Bollocks ! what the hell do people expect Shakespeare@we'reallfuckingbetter.com to submit poems?

This is so close to a 10 Bo Dereks nipples are shitting themselves.

Hey spazzman this is a daisy, well done man
[7] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 13-Nov-02/12:37 PM | Reply
bullshit. 7/10 is what it deserves simply because 'if you sing it out loud' some of the timings are fucked man period...not that it's not great..symbolically and all that jazz..it just..well... it would throw a singer off, and get him/her crossing shit out and adding their own words and stuff (that should be avoided at all costs)...and that becomes a nightmare for everyone involved.7.
[7] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 13-Nov-02/12:40 PM | Reply
and also the title is pompous and it blows just a bit. sorry but it should be anything but "me" unless you want to come across as being a pretentious squidly....how about "liver spots" instead, ,or "toothache".
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