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me (Lyric) by spazzman15
Chorus: Id rather be a fish than a bird Id rather stay silent Than say a single word I have a cell phone but nobody calls Ill cry you a river But not waterfalls I have a car but nowhere to go I love my music But theres no radio Id rather read a book than watch TV Id rather swim below Than sail atop the sea Chorus: I guess Im different is that okay? Id rather pick one rose Than buy a whole bouquet Id love to swim and have no wings And use my imagination To catch the conscience of the kings Chorus: Im happy this way I dont need to change I know it may seem Like Im a little strange But its all good and its all right You live your life And Ill live mine tonight

Up the ladder: going
Down the ladder: A Tale of Peter Pan

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.75
Weighted score: 5.201706
Overall Rank: 4487
Posted: November 12, 2002 1:35 PM PST; Last modified: November 12, 2002 1:35 PM PST
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[6] <~> @ | 12-Nov-02/1:42 PM | Reply
i'd rather be a hammer than a nail, and the play's the thing to catch a king....
[7] <{Baba^Yaga}> @ | 12-Nov-02/3:34 PM | Reply
lose the tonight at the end...not bad though...for a spazz. 7.
[10] Caducus @ | 13-Nov-02/9:32 AM | Reply
7/10 Bollocks ! what the hell do people expect Shakespeare@we' to submit poems?

This is so close to a 10 Bo Dereks nipples are shitting themselves.

Hey spazzman this is a daisy, well done man
[7] horus8 @ | 13-Nov-02/12:37 PM | Reply
bullshit. 7/10 is what it deserves simply because 'if you sing it out loud' some of the timings are fucked man period...not that it's not great..symbolically and all that just..well... it would throw a singer off, and get him/her crossing shit out and adding their own words and stuff (that should be avoided at all costs)...and that becomes a nightmare for everyone involved.7.
[7] horus8 @ | 13-Nov-02/12:40 PM | Reply
and also the title is pompous and it blows just a bit. sorry but it should be anything but "me" unless you want to come across as being a pretentious about "liver spots" instead, ,or "toothache".
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