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Chorus: Id rather be a fish than a bird Id rather stay silent Than say a single word I have a cell phone but nobody calls Ill cry you a river But not waterfalls I have a car but nowhere to go I love my music But theres no radio Id rather read a book than watch TV Id rather swim below Than sail atop the sea Chorus: I guess Im different is that okay? Id rather pick one rose Than buy a whole bouquet Id love to swim and have no wings And use my imagination To catch the conscience of the kings Chorus: Im happy this way I dont need to change I know it may seem Like Im a little strange But its all good and its all right You live your life And Ill live mine tonight

horus8 13-Nov-02/12:37 PM
bullshit. 7/10 is what it deserves simply because 'if you sing it out loud' some of the timings are fucked man period...not that it's not great..symbolically and all that jazz..it just..well... it would throw a singer off, and get him/her crossing shit out and adding their own words and stuff (that should be avoided at all costs)...and that becomes a nightmare for everyone involved.7.




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