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It started with a kiss (Free verse) by little_angel_maria
It started with a kiss, the backrow of my 15th birthday.
Never thought it would come to this.
I remenber every little thing you kissed me so gently and told me how
much you loved me.
It started with a kiss, never thought it would come to this,
then we were going home one rainy night, you covered me with your coat
so i wouldn't get wet,
then we got to a little cottage,
we kissed and kissed,
the cottage oh so warm,
and the aroma of your lynx, the mirrors oh so wet,
you grabbed oh so gently,
you and i were inseperable, we were oh so in love.
It started with a kiss, never thought it would come to this,
You carrased my hair, and i brushed my lips against yours.
I was only 15 and you were 17, we were alone in the cottage......
It started with a kiss never thought it would come to this,
the night got passionate and we made love,
Oh i felt so safe with you,
we were both so scared, but felt safer by the minute.
It started with a kiss,
never thought it would come to this.
Oh how i loved you logan, but three months later you left me, just when
i needed you mouth.
ps. thanx for everyone that has read and voted for my poems and the
people that are trying to help me out I love y'all
*hugz* laters love maria gabriela
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Posted: October 11, 2002 9:46 AM PDT; Last modified: October 11, 2002 9:46 AM PDT
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