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It started with a kiss (Free verse) by little_angel_maria

It started with a kiss, the backrow of my 15th birthday. Never thought it would come to this. I remenber every little thing you kissed me so gently and told me how much you loved me. It started with a kiss, never thought it would come to this, then we were going home one rainy night, you covered me with your coat so i wouldn't get wet, then we got to a little cottage, we kissed and kissed, the cottage oh so warm, and the aroma of your lynx, the mirrors oh so wet, you grabbed oh so gently, you and i were inseperable, we were oh so in love. It started with a kiss, never thought it would come to this, You carrased my hair, and i brushed my lips against yours. I was only 15 and you were 17, we were alone in the cottage...... It started with a kiss never thought it would come to this, the night got passionate and we made love, Oh i felt so safe with you, we were both so scared, but felt safer by the minute. It started with a kiss, never thought it would come to this. Oh how i loved you logan, but three months later you left me, just when i needed you mouth. ps. thanx for everyone that has read and voted for my poems and the people that are trying to help me out I love y'all *hugz* laters love maria gabriela

Amelia 11-Dec-02/12:33 PM
Baba, baby I think she meant 'most'. Not every babe is automatically a slut or "reeks (you used REEKS!) of death and weakness"




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