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crush on you (Free verse) by bxjay170 when i see you my heart just stops,
my mind goes blank and i cant find the right
words to say, all i want to do is grab you
and hold you in my arms and stare into your
sweet brown eyes, and watch you lick your
sexy lips, you get a thug weak the way you
move those hips. my dreams to make you my
girl and share this world with you,
the way you look at me makes me forget i
have a girl,the way we flirt makes me think
of you when am holdin my girl tight through
the night,i dont know if this feeling is
right or wrong but all i know is jasmine i
have a crush on you..
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Posted: November 11, 2002 12:00 PM PST; Last modified: November 11, 2002 12:00 PM PSTWeighted score: 4.764676 Overall Rank: 11414 Comments:
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<{Baba^Yaga}> @ 24.126.113.154
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11-Nov-02/12:05 PM
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the key to all of this...is more than lust..it's the shape of your vanerial warts and your venetian blinds...make a thug weak? are you pulling my leg, just come clean man..admit it! you have bitch tits.0.c
wow, wonderful piece, really portrays the deep emotional feelings you feel for another, i love "you get a thug weak the way you move those hips." wow, brilliant
ah yes, the double-sided blade of the one-eyed monster. may he stab at will.
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