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crush on you

Member since 2002 · Posted 11 Nov 2002 · 3 comments

when i see you my heart just stops, my mind goes blank and i cant find the right words to say, all i want to do is grab you and hold you in my arms and stare into your sweet brown eyes, and watch you lick your sexy lips, you get a thug weak the way you move those hips. my dreams to make you my girl and share this world with you, the way you look at me makes me forget i have a girl,the way we flirt makes me think of you when am holdin my girl tight through the night,i dont know if this feeling is right or wrong but all i know is jasmine i have a crush on you..

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[0] <{Baba^Yaga}> 11-Nov-02/12:05 PM Reply
the key to all of this...is more than lust..it's the shape of your vanerial warts and your venetian blinds...make a thug weak? are you pulling my leg, just come clean man..admit it! you have bitch tits.0.c
[10] Dark Angle 11-Nov-02/12:27 PM Reply
wow, wonderful piece, really portrays the deep emotional feelings you feel for another, i love "you get a thug weak the way you move those hips." wow, brilliant
[4] brazen 12-Nov-02/4:57 AM Reply
ah yes, the double-sided blade of the one-eyed monster. may he stab at will.