poemranker ::Rewrite of a goof poem. by INTRANSIT

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Free verse № 31740

Rewrite of a goof poem.

Member since 2002 · Posted 24 Dec 2002 · 6 comments

Poets! Arise! Take up quill and scroll and address those nearest you. Question them and make them ponder. Humor them tell funny limericks and tickle their tongue. Tell tales of pain Word them into woe. Show them how it feels to be. Take their hand in yours, Take them out of themselves and lead them to love.

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6 comments

[6] kaykat 24-Dec-02/2:36 PM Reply
I like!! It's good!
[n/a] INTRANSIT › kaykat 24-Dec-02/2:51 PM Reply
I like the original better. Thanks for the P\F KK.
[5] <~> 24-Dec-02/5:32 PM Reply
i like the orignal better too.

merry christmas to yoooo!
[7] horus8 24-Dec-02/6:00 PM Reply
yuel tide cheer!!
[6] brazen 24-Dec-02/10:22 PM Reply
mappy chrismakuh
[8] Jill Stockinger 1-Jan-21/11:39 AM Reply
Sweet!