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Rewrite of a goof poem. (Free verse) by INTRANSIT Poets! Arise!
Take up quill and scroll
and address those nearest you.
Question them
and make them ponder.
Humor them
tell funny limericks
and tickle their tongue.
Tell tales of pain
Word them into woe.
Show them how it feels to be.
Take their hand in yours,
Take them out of themselves
and lead them to love.
Up the ladder:
crush on you
Down the ladder:
who?
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Posted: December 24, 2002 2:34 PM PST; Last modified: December 24, 2002 2:34 PM PSTWeighted score: 4.764676 Overall Rank: 11410 Comments:
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kaykat @ 209.83.111.78
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24-Dec-02/2:36 PM
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I like!! It's good!
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INTRANSIT @ 205.188.209.77
> kaykat
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24-Dec-02/2:51 PM
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I like the original better. Thanks for the P\F KK.
i like the orignal better too.
merry christmas to yoooo!
yuel tide cheer!!
mappy chrismakuh
Sweet!
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