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crush on you (Free verse) by bxjay170

when i see you my heart just stops, my mind goes blank and i cant find the right words to say, all i want to do is grab you and hold you in my arms and stare into your sweet brown eyes, and watch you lick your sexy lips, you get a thug weak the way you move those hips. my dreams to make you my girl and share this world with you, the way you look at me makes me forget i have a girl,the way we flirt makes me think of you when am holdin my girl tight through the night,i dont know if this feeling is right or wrong but all i know is jasmine i have a crush on you..

Dark Angle 11-Nov-02/12:27 PM
wow, wonderful piece, really portrays the deep emotional feelings you feel for another, i love "you get a thug weak the way you move those hips." wow, brilliant




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