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Charcoal haven (Free verse) by Service
When the forest burns
When the apples spit
When the garden's black
Still i tend to it.
When the mother lies
When the father dies
When the child cries
Still nothing changes.
No hope to salvage
I strolled along
Silently starving
By my own choice.
I feel new bark soon
I feel renewed now
I taste sweet fruit,
that nourishes me.
But to stay in this tree
But to stay in its shade
But to live off its treasures
I must leave my charcoal haven.
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.5
Weighted score: 5.134471
Overall Rank: 5551
Posted: October 8, 2002 9:57 PM PDT; Last modified: October 8, 2002 9:57 PM PDT
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