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Transform (Free verse) by savagelymakeitcount Your face
transparent in the moonlight
Almost forgotten
Giggling in mad delight
You hover
Your patience commended
Full face
shadowy, demented
You talk
Care, I cannt accomplish
Stealthy you
My guilt you demolish
My face
Skin of concience melting
Not I
But I cold heart beating
Up the ladder:
Charcoal haven
Down the ladder:
An Exercise in Futility
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Posted: November 8, 2002 8:21 PM PST; Last modified: November 8, 2002 8:21 PM PSTWeighted score: 5.134471 Overall Rank: 5552 164 view(s)
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