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.:|Mindfucked|:. (Free verse) by emman
Me Aes Sedai-face on the inside: A raging storm on the outside: calm cold indifferent Nothing gives it away Totally blank I'm not hard as stone, only emotionally fucked up damaged goods... The eyes are the window to you soul... So they say Though they couldn't be more wrong Feelings can be hidden... Sometimes you can even fake Pretend to feel Just to seem more human Self-discipline Hating yourself Never let it show Never let it get to you Never ever be weak...

Up the ladder: End of life
Down the ladder: Everything & Nothing

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.3333335
Weighted score: 4.820706
Overall Rank: 10908
Posted: November 5, 2002 12:09 PM PST; Last modified: November 5, 2002 12:15 PM PST
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[5] Frass @ 66.160.116.193 | 5-Nov-02/1:17 PM | Reply
I'm curious about line two; Swedish? From this poem, I thought you were a male. "Just to seem more human" but, the result is seeming more like an emotionless automaton.
[n/a] emman @ 213.204.135.16 > Frass | 5-Nov-02/6:27 PM | Reply
line two = Robert Jordan's books "Wheel Of Time"...nothing swedish about it...
[10] <{Baba^Yaga}> @ 24.126.113.154 | 5-Nov-02/2:38 PM | Reply
this is quite charming and true. 10.??
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