Re: a comment on Sunlighting by ALChemy |
7-Jan-06/7:14 AM |
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Re: Try Thinking Too by Bankrupt_Word_Clerk |
14-Jul-05/7:43 AM |
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Re: Al-Qaida Blues by Bluemonkey |
11-Jul-05/5:57 PM |
I decided to become the anti-cockphage, and vote 10 on every single poeme on the site.
But then I thought, no. I can't be arsed.
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Re: a.m. by oneglove |
11-Jul-05/5:55 PM |
I have decided to become the anti-cockmage, and vote 10 on every single poeme on the site.
But then I thought, no. I can't be arsed.
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Re: Happy Charlene by Dovina |
11-Jul-05/5:52 PM |
After reading the first line, I though 'ugh'. Not a good start, almost made me run.
I am glad I didn't because the rest is clever and serrated. I wanna be sedated.
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Re: Lover by Dental Panic |
9-Jul-05/8:18 PM |
I think this is excellent
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Re: All You Need Is Gloves by -=DIABETES=- |
25-Apr-05/6:35 AM |
can i have gloves custom fitted to accomodate my massive pinky ring?
I think the scale should have halfs. I really want to vote this a 1.5, but i can't :.(..
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Re: a comment on Middle-Aged White Woman by Dovina |
22-Apr-05/7:07 PM |
Let us not forget the tapioca beards of the negroe jesuse lawne ornamtents.
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Re: a comment on Baggage (3rd ending) by INTRANSIT |
22-Apr-05/6:55 PM |
umbilical. cat's, rabbit's
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Re: A love apple's just a tomato (edit of "Uprooting") by fevriere |
21-Apr-05/7:29 PM |
i thought love was just sausages.
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Re: standing outside the door by nentwined |
21-Apr-05/7:11 PM |
kinda funny. last line doesn't work on me.
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Re: Baggage (3rd ending) by INTRANSIT |
21-Apr-05/7:07 PM |
I must assume that the misspellings are intentional? and the misplaced apostrophes?
the final stanza (paragraph) is unwieldy, and the metaphor a bit cute, but I think it works okay, and the interior images (if that makes any fucking sense) are really good.
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Re: 15 Minute poem by Damien |
20-Apr-05/4:41 PM |
This is the best poem I have ever read. -0-
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Re: Utensils of creation by Damien |
20-Apr-05/4:36 PM |
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Re: Coloured waifs home by horus8 |
9-Apr-05/8:40 AM |
This is actually a chancrous cock on a string
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Re: Moments (or) Suicide by Dovina |
8-Apr-05/4:30 PM |
Are we supposed to give a numerical vote on your life, or on the poem? Life: 2.1, poem: -0-
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Re: a comment on Prayer For The Church by sliver |
7-Apr-05/3:25 PM |
If there were a God, my only prayer every day would be that He not consider what nitwits like you want. For every one of your prayers, I offer...the anti-prayer.
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Re: a comment on Prayer For The Church by sliver |
7-Apr-05/3:18 PM |
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Re: Prayer For The Church by sliver |
7-Apr-05/3:14 PM |
I giant, malodorous dumpling, the likes of which I have rarely seen. It is marvelous.
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Re: Hard Rock by Dovina |
7-Apr-05/3:08 PM |
Please wipe, or otherwise de-guff, your hooves before clopping onto the ranker.
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