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Try Thinking Too (Free verse) by Bankrupt_Word_Clerk
The paint thickens on the walls
as the sound of your
voice etches the window panes
with a romantic design
made to warp vision
and creativity in
one long-winded sigh.
Passion and intelligence
are not mutually
exclusive elements in
your unbending word choices,
but so often the
former is used while the
latter is left outside
like a dog with mange
glossy coat notwithstanding.
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.6666665
Weighted score: 5.179294
Overall Rank: 4830
Posted: June 30, 2005 12:40 AM PDT; Last modified: June 30, 2005 12:40 AM PDT
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