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Try Thinking Too (Free verse) by Bankrupt_Word_Clerk
The paint thickens on the walls as the sound of your voice etches the window panes with a romantic design made to warp vision and creativity in one long-winded sigh. Passion and intelligence are not mutually exclusive elements in your unbending word choices, but so often the former is used while the latter is left outside like a dog with mange glossy coat notwithstanding.

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.6666665
Weighted score: 5.179294
Overall Rank: 4841
Posted: June 30, 2005 12:40 AM PDT; Last modified: June 30, 2005 12:40 AM PDT
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[10] zodiac @ 194.165.157.165 | 30-Jun-05/3:39 AM | Reply
I've spent the last fifteen minutes thinking about how intelligence may be like a dog with mange. I've got nothing. Sounds cool, though.
[7] Dovina @ 12.72.7.153 | 30-Jun-05/8:00 AM | Reply
So she has a glossy coat of passion covering mangy skin of unintelligence. Sounds like a passionate way of saying it.
[n/a] Bankrupt_Word_Clerk @ 69.231.25.124 > Dovina | 30-Jun-05/11:49 AM | Reply
the glossy coat is on the un-manged intellect (dog) that is being ignored for the sake of passionate expression.
[8] darby pyn @ 207.200.116.130 | 2-Jul-05/12:44 AM | Reply
very vivid.
well done. 8
[0] edpeterson @ 68.79.22.28 | 14-Jul-05/7:43 AM | Reply
bullshit
[n/a] Roisin @ 81.151.179.72 | 21-Jan-06/6:55 PM | Reply
Splendid...
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