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Free verse № 94950

I'm Alive!

by sonawrote

Member since 2004 · Posted 24 Mar 2004 · 6 comments

Would you have even tried if I spoke a word, you knew I lied turn the pages of a book you got more than it took throw your head back....I’m alive could you see the streets that I’ve know I can hear it in your tone wrapped up in you to stay around never let me hit the ground....I’m alive Swinging arm and arm to dance times of love and sweet romance throw myself right into you everything you do, tells me... I’m alive throw your head back ...I’m alive never let me hit the ground....I’m alive everything you do, tells me...I’m alive

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[6] zodiac 25-Mar-04/6:34 AM Reply
My favorite part was when you kinda summarized all your previous points at the end. That really drew it all together for me.
[9] Shuushin 25-Mar-04/6:34 AM Reply
Hey - not a bad hook. Could make a good song.
[n/a] caffrey › Shuushin 25-Mar-04/7:54 PM Reply
it's already a hook in a song. Pearl Jam's Alive.
[9] Shuushin › caffrey 25-Mar-04/8:01 PM Reply
Oh. Just the title, or the whole damn thing?

You kids and your rock and roll.
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 25-Mar-04/6:34 AM Reply
A toilet-approved Swiss army jodhpur of triumph -10-
[9] deleted user 25-Mar-04/1:56 PM Reply
I like it because I feel dead and jealous.
"streets that I've known"