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Try Thinking Too (Free verse) by Bankrupt_Word_Clerk

The paint thickens on the walls as the sound of your voice etches the window panes with a romantic design made to warp vision and creativity in one long-winded sigh. Passion and intelligence are not mutually exclusive elements in your unbending word choices, but so often the former is used while the latter is left outside like a dog with mange glossy coat notwithstanding.

Dovina 30-Jun-05/8:00 AM
So she has a glossy coat of passion covering mangy skin of unintelligence. Sounds like a passionate way of saying it.




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