standing outside the door

Member since 2001 · Posted 20 Apr 2005 · 3 comments

My urine hose waits coiled and ready; change rattles in my pocket and only after striking will the hiss come out. Don't bug me.

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[8] edpeterson 21-Apr-05/7:11 PM Reply

kinda funny. last line doesn't work on me.

[10] INTRANSIT 22-Apr-05/1:51 PM Reply

Deca- dence.

[9] Jill Stockinger 15-Jan-07/7:51 PM Reply

The "don't bug me" I take it refers to the other person waiting to get into the bathroom, named in the title-