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standing outside the door (Free verse) by nentwined My urine hose waits
coiled and ready;
change rattles in my pocket
and only after striking
will the hiss come out.
Don't bug me.
Up the ladder:
All There
Down the ladder:
killer boredom butterfly (esoteric)
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Posted: April 20, 2005 6:14 PM PDT; Last modified: April 20, 2005 6:14 PM PDTWeighted score: 6.9 Overall Rank: 243 Comments:
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edpeterson @ 68.79.19.7
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21-Apr-05/7:11 PM
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kinda funny. last line doesn't work on me.
Deca- dence.
The "don't bug me" I take it refers to the other person waiting to get into the bathroom, named in the title-
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