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standing outside the door (Free verse) by nentwined

My urine hose waits coiled and ready; change rattles in my pocket and only after striking will the hiss come out. Don't bug me.

edpeterson 21-Apr-05/7:11 PM
kinda funny. last line doesn't work on me.




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