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standing outside the door
(
Free verse
) by
nentwined
My urine hose waits coiled and ready; change rattles in my pocket and only after striking will the hiss come out. Don't bug me.
edpeterson
21-Apr-05/7:11 PM
kinda funny. last line doesn't work on me.
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